script coverage

So you’ve finished a script? That’s seriously amazing. Half the battle is finishing a thing.

It can be daunting to send your work out to be read by others, and especially to get feedback that is honest and more importantly, helps. It can be good to get the vision balls of someone separate to look at your work with freshness and no prior knowledge of the project.

That’s where I can butt myself into the conversation. Politely of course.

What I offer with this service is comprehensive feedback on your script in a set-up that is clear and concise.

You’ll receive page specific notes followed by an overall summary sliced into the following segments:

• Dialogue

• Pacing

• Characters

• Structure

• Theme

• Concept

• Formatting

• Style

Costs

5 - 30 pages: £30

31 - 60 pages: £60

61 - 90 pages: £90

91 - 120 pages: £120

dialogue spritzing

We pride ourselves on developing conversations within a narrative that not only service the plot and characters within it, but feels natural and lived in.

It’s important to us for each character to have their own voice. Have you ever watched a scene where two characters sounds so alike that you could change out who says what and it wouldn’t affect a thing? That’s a nightmare as far as we’re concerned.

We want each character’s dialogue to say something about them and not just be directionless, teaching us nothing of note.

What we offer is page specific alternates and summaries as to why we are suggesting them in the first place.

If this sounds like something you might benefit from then we’re buzzing to get stuck in.

Costs

5 - 30 pages: £30

31 - 60 pages: £60

61 - 90 pages: £90

91 - 120 pages: £120